I believe weathermen have the easiest job in the world. When you really think about it, it’s the one job in whole world where you can mess up every day and still keep your job. I mean, how hard is it to become a weatherman. They get paid for a thirty second segment of false information. And when they are actually right about the forecast, it’s pretty obvious to tell on your own. Of course it’s going to be sunny if there are on clouds in the sky. If there are really dark clouds covering the sky, I’m almost positive that people can figure out it is going to rain. I just don’t understand how certain people have a preference about what channel they need to watch to see today’s weather. Just tell me the reason why there is a weather channel. Does the weather channel go around bragging to other stations that they have the forecast 24/7? I sure hope not. There could be plenty of other channels instead of the weather channel. One more question to think about. If people who say the world is going to end are considered crazy, why aren’t weathermen?
Interesting...Howcome weathermen? Isn't there a life goal that you live up to that you would rather write about? Good job though. I like that you have many things to support your statement.
ReplyDeleteI love the ideas in this entry! You are smart and clever and funny. It's really true. Weather forecasters make mistakes everyday and still keep their jobs. Your last sentence is terrific!Thanks for a creative and thoughtful entry.
ReplyDelete3/5 points. The structure of your entry does not meet the rubric. Yikes! One big paragraph! Next time separate the ideas and include distinct paragraphs with transitions. Also, there are a variety of small mechanical errors. For example, "Of course it’s going to be sunny if there are on clouds in the sky." Reread this sentence. I bet you can find the mistake. You have really wise and sophisticated ideas. Start tackling the mechanical errors so your writing is the best it can be.